I tried..
I tried to make you happy but I failed
I tried to erase your past but I failed
I tried to fight your demons but I failed
I tried to change myself but I failed
I tried to paint you a future but I failed
I tried to stop you going away but I failed
I tried to get you back but I failed
I tried hard yet failed
And I tried to write this down but I failed here too
No matter how hard I tried
It doesn’t really matter in the end…
Hey Guys ! So this is for the second time I’ve tried to write something like a poetry (Not sure if I can call it).
If you haven’t read my first poem, Click here.
Do let me know your thoughts on it in the comment section below π
Have A great Sunday ahead ! βοΈ
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November 18, 2018 at 4:09 am
I can see the feelings here.ππ
November 18, 2018 at 6:21 am
Thank you Pritam π
Have a great day βοΈ
November 18, 2018 at 4:20 am
Basically you tried is very important. Some of them don’t even try. And don’t think that it’s not registered but it’s registered.
Beautiful lines Mr. βοΈπ
November 18, 2018 at 6:23 am
That’s so true. Thank you so much for reading & your kind wordsπ
November 18, 2018 at 12:36 pm
My pleasure βοΈ
November 18, 2018 at 4:24 am
Trying matters, winning doesn’t.β€οΈ Good attemptπ
November 18, 2018 at 6:24 am
Thank you for those two lines πβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 4:26 am
It’s the effort you put in that matters and everything else is unnecessary. π
November 18, 2018 at 6:25 am
True that!
Thank you so much πβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 6:38 am
It’s my pleasure! π
November 18, 2018 at 4:27 am
You didn’t failed in writing. Good one and the emotional touch is described beautifully in this poem. ππ
November 18, 2018 at 6:26 am
Thank you so much Ashish for your kind wordsπβ€οΈβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 4:30 am
Love it bro.All the best
November 18, 2018 at 6:26 am
Thank you bro πβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 4:30 am
Touchy lines & deep !!I felt ur words sumeet !!
Amazing read to start the Sunday morning βΊοΈ
November 18, 2018 at 6:27 am
Thank you so much Nirant ! It means a lot to me .π
Have a great day βοΈ
November 18, 2018 at 4:57 am
Itβs good trust me…when reading or going through words makes a difference in thinking for a moment itβs worth an effort…so itβs a good one..simple and lucid
November 18, 2018 at 4:59 am
When lines touch us and block our thoughts making their way itβs definitely worth the effort, simple, easy flowingπ
November 18, 2018 at 6:27 am
Thank you so much β€οΈβ€οΈ
I’m glad to know you liked it π
November 18, 2018 at 5:04 am
Nice try! π
November 18, 2018 at 6:28 am
Thank you Winnie πβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 7:53 am
Youβre welcome! π
November 18, 2018 at 5:13 am
The more you write, your confidence builds. Good start and kudos for posting it (wink) Blessings!
November 18, 2018 at 6:29 am
Thank you so much Annπβ€οΈ
I’ll surely try more of this
November 18, 2018 at 12:26 pm
Youβre most welcome (smile)
November 18, 2018 at 5:20 am
i can actually feel the pain and the urge to let it go.
nice oneπππ
November 18, 2018 at 6:29 am
Thank you so much dearπβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 6:36 am
welcome ππ
November 18, 2018 at 5:52 am
This melted my heart.
And your words, they never fail. π
November 18, 2018 at 6:29 am
Thank you so much Kajal β€οΈβ€οΈπ
November 18, 2018 at 6:10 am
This is very well penned! I can connect with your words. What really matters is, ‘you tried’.
Is this your second poem? I’m really excited to read more of these now. Do keep writing. π
November 18, 2018 at 6:30 am
Yes , it is my second poem. I’ll surely try to write more.
Thank you so much πβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 6:22 am
Heartfelt
November 18, 2018 at 6:31 am
Thank you Sakshiπβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 6:33 am
My pleasure
November 18, 2018 at 6:54 am
I must say itβs a great start, itβs a deep work! Kudos!
November 18, 2018 at 8:59 am
Thank you so much Tanya β€οΈ
Means a lot
November 18, 2018 at 1:15 pm
My pleasure π
November 18, 2018 at 9:18 am
It’s a good read. Do write whenever you can.
November 18, 2018 at 9:43 am
Thank you so much ! Yes , I’ll surely try to write more πβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 9:43 am
Heart and soul and thoughts and words? Yep, sounds like poetry to me. β€
November 18, 2018 at 6:31 am
Haha ! Thank you so much dearβ€οΈπ
November 18, 2018 at 9:57 am
At least you’ve tried… π
November 18, 2018 at 1:13 pm
Yes ,I did. Thank you for reading πβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 10:19 am
This is so poignant and lovely Sumeet
November 18, 2018 at 1:13 pm
Thank you so much Adithyaπβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 10:46 am
YOU are a beautiful Soul. Let GO! the guilt and negative emotion. There are NO failures…that does not exist. It is a part of Your Journey where You were “growing” To gain the wisdom You Have NOW! Look Forward and IMAGINE the world You want to SEE. Where there is Love…..there is only Love…….Keep SHINNING
November 18, 2018 at 1:14 pm
This comment my day β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Thank you so much for your positive & inspiring words. Means a lot to me π
November 18, 2018 at 12:23 pm
I feel the same way sometimesβ¦..very relatable to me and really touched a chord in my heartβ¦..
November 18, 2018 at 8:59 am
Thank you so much Tithi π
I’m glad to know you could relate to it
November 18, 2018 at 2:34 pm
I tried not to get emotional while reading your poem but I failedβ¦
Loved itβ¦word by word ππ
November 18, 2018 at 1:14 pm
That’s so sweet of you.
Thank you so much Lavanyaπβ€οΈ
November 18, 2018 at 4:51 pm
Very touching…nice read and nice perspective !
November 18, 2018 at 7:08 pm
This is so beautiful ..Heartfelt..love the way you pen down
November 19, 2018 at 1:53 am
Thank you so much dear β€οΈπ
November 18, 2018 at 9:50 pm
This is beautiful π«
November 19, 2018 at 1:53 am
Thank you π
November 19, 2018 at 2:48 am
Heartfelt..youβve penned down your thoughts so beautifully!!
November 19, 2018 at 4:26 am
Thank you so much Krantiπ
November 19, 2018 at 1:39 pm
My absolute pleasure π
November 19, 2018 at 2:10 pm
The originality and the feelings are genuine and that what makes your poem real π
November 19, 2018 at 3:16 pm
Thank you so much Parikhit πβ€οΈ
November 19, 2018 at 5:30 pm
Just a little recognition for your blog. No obligation to participate.
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November 20, 2018 at 6:53 am
I think it’s pretty good, Accidental Blogger!
November 21, 2018 at 7:12 pm
Poems are in the eye of the beholder
November 21, 2018 at 10:45 pm
Hahah ! Thank you dear πβ€οΈ
November 22, 2018 at 4:56 am
yep yep π
November 22, 2018 at 3:58 am
Trying matters always ππ
November 22, 2018 at 9:21 am
Yes !
Thank you for reading π
November 25, 2018 at 7:20 am
These lines are felt.. Great work
November 25, 2018 at 10:37 am
Thank you so much π
November 25, 2018 at 10:53 am
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November 28, 2018 at 8:47 am
this is beautiful, u didn’t fail anyone, don’t be too hard on yourself π
November 28, 2018 at 9:26 am
Thank you so much dear πβ€οΈ